Steam Bar: The Visitor
PAGE ONE:
Panel one:
Panoramic view (takes up two panels) of the Steam Bar with Sallie managing the cash drawer. The bar (Old western style) is bustling with patrons playing cards and drinking ale. A drunkard stumbles up to Sallie.
DRUNKARD: (slurs-Indicate with the misshapen bubble) you look familiar, pretty face, I never forget a pretty face.
Panel two:
Sallie closes the cash drawer. Ching.
SALLIE: I’m sure you don’t.
Panel three:
Sallie walks back to her office with the cash bag. The drunkard looking after her. (View over the shoulder of the drunkard.)
Panel Four:
Sally is sitting at her desk counting the cash from the bag.
SALLIE: (Thought bubble) I can’t deal with another run-in with the past. Why can’t it just die down? Why can’t I just get away from it and forget it all?
Panel Five:
Sally stores the bag in a safe.
SALLIE: (Thought bubble) I can’t even remember their faces anymore. All the men. No way to know them and hide if I see them. No way to escape.
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Game Pitch
Executive Summary
Tides of War is a console base on the experiences of players in a popular mobile game. The wars, personal fights, and struggles to climb to take over the seas. A world separate from our world, filled with monsters, water that isn’t water, and no land.
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